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Posted 08/02/07 07:39 by DamnDude
Well... The song is really random, the parts clash together, the parts are too fast with too many instruments playing too fast at the same time, clashing everything together into a mess you cant relate too, there is little actual melody because the parts just randomly clash together (such as the piano parts, it just seems too random, like you closed your eyes and just pressed random numbers). Dissonance is great in my opinion, but not in this song, if it were to be recorded it would just sound like badly tuned instruments trying to play a riff that has no coherency, if youre going to use dissonances, I advice you to do it moderately, and have an actual melody. That being said, there are cool parts in this song, but they often last just a few bars before something ruins it by comming with a totally random melody that in noway fits to the riff just played. So: Have more coherent songs parts, where the instruments actually fit together. Random is good if its not "random" random. Make the melody last more than 2 bars. 195-200 is an excellent part, but then a random ending comes at 201 in a totally diffrent key, clashing with the previous part and ending disruptly, this is what I mean by "random" random. Make better use of dissonant chords and harmonies, it really sounds bad in this song. I think I covered what I could think of, dont think Im bashing you, Im just telling you what I felt wrong with this song, and why I really didnt enjoy listening to it.
Posted 08/02/07 23:26 by DemonMeridion
Ok, thx for advice, I´m not a skilfull composer at all, I´m just a beginner ^^
Posted 08/08/07 00:07 by Arkoronz
I dunno, I thought there were some rather good parts in it. Still, some parts, very dissonant, not too easy listen too. But overall, not sooooo bad.
Posted 08/08/07 20:26 by Cadmus
I thought that the randomize was purpose. It made the song more demonic.

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